My God...
In this day of cheap comedies and parodies, you've managed to produce a truly beautiful thing. It was amazingly touching, despite the quality problems you found.
Animation: 10/10. Stuff that looks half as good as this gets aired on television.
Music: 9/10. It generally fit the scenario and sounded great, but I found it a bit repetitive.
Voice Acting: 10/10. Great actors, great mike. Nothing better.
Story: 10/10. Amazingly touching and gentle among the bloody slaughters and low-brow humor that is Newgrounds (no offense anyone, I love the stuff XD)
Total: 10/10, 5/5. You managed to convince me to write my first proper review.