Very nicely done.
Personally, I couldn't see much wrong with the proportions. Yes, the jawline was a little narrow, but what is that in the face of the whole? Now MY art... THAT'S got proportion trouble o_-
Tried animation, quickly learned it wasn't for me. So hey there, welcome to a writer's NG profile :) Message me if you're interested in a sample of my work, or my services, if I might be so bold.
Age 30, Female
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Joined on 4/2/09